Focussing on imperfections and some other areas that are under consideration I definitely need to do better on day 5. Areas left white should be consistent, the width the same, can I do this? I am not sure as there are quite a few factors:- eyesight, hand, paint and brush and supporting surfaces. The paper has been selected, I wouldn't choose it again. I will try and do better. The paper is affecting how the watercolour pools, I will live with that also. I need to introduce some finer detail , it is to blocky with nothing to focus on.
I will open Adolf Bernd's Book on painted letters and see what solutions he uses and perhaps improve mine.
The words today are 'come down’.